Writing Club Exercise #1
Dec 3, 2013
Prompt:
Write anything using the following words:
Shoes Blushing
Study Reject
Chubby Piano
Butterfly Lure
It was all because of a
broken heel. He could hear the piano playing in a crescendo now
breaking into the strings. The music was
always there, but her presence had added that percussive snap to his symphony. Her shoes
had snapped at the perfect moment and of course, gravity took hold, sending her
hurtling towards the concrete and her purse in the entirely different
direction. Dennis grabbed hold of curvy
brunette’s arm preventing her from certain peril in the street with the
oncoming moving van.
As he helped her up, her
face met his blushing. She was pretty in the way that chubby girls
were, doll faced. She reminded him of
the porcelain figurines in his grandmother’s china cabinet with their shiny
veneers and carefully painted butterfly
smiles. Too look at and not touch lest
they break. Only this doll wasn’t
smiling.
“Thank you, but would you
mind letting go of my arm,” her irritation was evident. Her teeth were grinding weren’t they? Her breath rising in steaming puffs.
Letting her go, he watched as she brushed her red trench
exaggeratedl, her hands trying desperately to wipe off the imaginary
dust. He had touched her and that was
profane. Should he have just allowed this
uptowner to fall into traffic?
Perhaps.
Her nails were a done in a French
manicure. He looked down at his
disheveled pants and then momentarily to his filthy hands, grease ground into
his callouses and dirt lodged under his nails.
He hadn’t thought about it when he caught her. Just that he didn’t want to see the pretty
bird get crushed.
For a moment their eyes
met once more, her scowl softened for a millisecond as she studied him. “Thank you”
rose once more from her pristine throat wrapped in a bright orange scarf. The shade complimented her dark coffee
hair. She slipped off her other shoe,
and extended it to him. “Would you? I don’t want to break a nail.” Luring
him in with a painted smile. He couldn’t
say no, though he knew she would reject
him in a breath. Yes, she was a butterfly, flitting away down the
street in her newly made flats to the tune of a sad violin.
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